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return to the fold
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 08:56:20 AM in AEST
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to discover the elusive comporment of these twilight years fallen wishes well-worn paths well-worn lost desires coin by coin petal by petal dropping like falling stars time past into time full of lost full of empty sleepy patchwork slow dance of time sweet half-life slow sugar-coated coma of a dance Goddess have mercy the past laid out the present as it is the future as it will be and will be again a unfurling breathless with a shiver motion time beyond.
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2009-09-23 08:56:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: return to the fold
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 07:26:34 PM AEST (User
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I love to follow your trail of words & the succession of meaning. This piece speaks
to me of time, life lived & the move beyond what we dare to know. Great piece. elle :) |
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