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A Stranger in the Mirror of Your Eyes
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 08:39:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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In the mirror of your eyes, it was me, only me;
the reflection is now a stranger to see.
Your brown bedazzling eyes once warmed my heart;
now their gaze pierces my love with hates' dart.
In the mirror of your eyes, it was me, only me;
now clouds in you eyes disguise all honesty.
The silhouettes in your eyes are not mine;
your eyes have dimmed their once loving shine.
In the mirror of your eyes, it was me, only me;
now I am unwanted company.
Cluttered confusion camouflages the brown;
if I was now in your eye's mirror, I would drown.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-09-23 20:39:10]
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Re: A Stranger in the Mirror of Your Eyes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 09:58:18 PM AEST
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Sad but well done.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: A Stranger in the Mirror of Your Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 10:04:17 PM AEST
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Made me wanna cry with this one and I relate to this one as well... exceptin' her eyes are green.
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Re: A Stranger in the Mirror of Your Eyes
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 10:45:38 PM AEST
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BRAVO!!!! What A fine piece!! I will definetly be taking A look at more of your works!!!
Keep writing & Posting!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana |
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Re: A Stranger in the Mirror of Your Eyes
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:20:23 AM AEST
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I dig the way this flows
well done
good write.... |
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Re: A Stranger in the Mirror of Your Eyes
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by Demita on
Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 11:38:35 PM AEST
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i know i've felt this way before..
and to love someone and no longer be loved in return is horrible |
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