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A Lone Tear
Contributed by
arclargo
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Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:41:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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He sits hunched in his chair at her bedside,
Her years of fighting are coming an end.
Her eyes are heavy from the days she has cried,
She whispers, I love you my soul mate, my friend.
Biting his lip he leans toward her ear,
I love you more my sweetheart, more than you know.
Dont be frightened; you have nothing to fear,
For when you are gone, I will surely soon follow.
His swelling mouth caresses her brow,
Her sweat on his lips tastes so sweet,
Her eyes remain closed now,
As a lone tear falls to the sheet.
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Re: A Lone Tear
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 08:08:32 AM AEST
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How beautiful, how sad, but a true soul mate.
I love this one |
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Re: A Lone Tear
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 11:07:33 AM AEST
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| That is fantastically sad, if such a thing is possible!.........I'm speechless....................a lone tear?...there will be bucket loads when people read this. |
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Re: A Lone Tear
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by LadyRose on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 12:00:41 PM AEST
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| the sweetest thing I have read in a while.... |
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Re: A Lone Tear
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:24:36 PM AEST
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| the sweetest poem about true love. i adore this. |
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