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pick...
Contributed by
ming
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Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 10:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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with our remorse/anger
we could untie
love knots.
(spirals out of control)
step patterns
walking out the front door.
(tarnished)
key patterns
locked.
loops
splayed open.
begining and end,
ends.
loose
stylized
spiral
spun.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-09-25 10:05:22]
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Re: pick...
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 07:13:34 PM AEST
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This striking word on word form leads me to believe that we could unlock the secrets of the heart. . . forego the moment of good-bye. . .
all for our own good. So much unsaid & yet a world of thought to take note of. Your style is so intriguing I feel I must, one day, give it ago.
(They say imitation is the highest form of flattery!) Hope I do you justice. . . elle :) |
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