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Rhythm of the heart
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
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Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 04:40:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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They watched the sky turn from blue to gray,
Sitting at the end of his driveway he saw a perfect chance,
As the clouds rolling in began to cry,
He took her and asked her to dance,
Her face lit up like a night sky on the fourth of July,
Then she flashes that smile that makes his heart skip a beat,
He spins her around and she clumsily falls into his embrace,
They begin to slow dance in the street,
As he moves a strand of wet hair away from her face,
He loves the way she looks at him,
She loves the way he looks at her,
Their hearts make a steady rhythm,
That they can dance to forever,
Even when the clouds are crying and their hair is turning gray,
They won't care,
They will dance in the street anyway.
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Re: Rhythm of the heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th September 2009 @ 01:35:25 AM AEST
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A very lovely poem. Nice. It gives one a very pleasant feeling .I like it, the sentiments contained within and the statement of longevity for their love. Something I am sure a lot of is would want.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Rhythm of the heart
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by girish on
Saturday, 26th September 2009 @ 03:01:45 AM AEST
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| H Nice write. *** Comment edited. Self promotion is not allowed at YPDC. *** Moderator_18 September 26, 2009 |
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