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Self
Contributed by
MaryAnson
on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 05:00:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My self is always shuttered
And its really only you
Who plumbs the deep recesses
Of my very tilted view
But are you a true comfort,
A salve for rage and shame
When those ever-deep recesses
Are the place from where you came?
Copyright ©
MaryAnson
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2009-09-27 05:00:31]
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Re: Self
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 06:01:05 AM AEST
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This is wonderfully provocative. There is a disturbing and yet expecting
question that rides throughout the piece. The emotion that bridges the
lines, fills the reader with an intense discontent. If we cannot find peace
within our own recesses, what hope do we really have?
This is exceptional. Two small verses, but they are so full. Excellent post.
~ Breezy
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Re: Self
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 06:59:46 AM AEST
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I concur with Breezy
One can be harsh when the self is judging.. oneself.
Cheers I enjoyed this.
~Bin~ |
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Re: Self
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by Antzus on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 05:14:52 AM AEST
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| Superb choice of words here. I can really feel the edge of insanity trying to creep in. I don't exactly know what you're describing in the second stanza, but I think I like the abstract and mystery. That last question mark confuses me though. |
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Re: Self
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 04:21:05 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking. Would love to hear/read the answer.
Tim |
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Re: Self
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 04:56:41 PM AEST
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Yes, very interesting poem. Well put together also, it flowed with panache.
-Phil |
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