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You Don't Exist
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 03:13:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Sometimes I go to the place we would meet Tip-toe quietly, on little kitten feet I sit by myself and look up at the moon Praying that somehow, you'll be back soon.
My heart aches to see your dark brown eyes Sad, yet pure, with nothing to hide It seems something's missing, from my heart I cry each night and tear my soul apart...
There's nowhere to run Can't escape this pain Cornered unfairly I am going insane No way to comfort No way to heal If you don't exist Then nothing is real...
Walk through the night; don't even look back Confidence is the only thing that I lack Part of my being, still belongs to you And I hope you still remember me too.
There's nowhere to go No way to stop This profuse bleeding Will take more than a mop Collapsed and suffering My life you will steal If you don't exist Then nothing is real...
Sometimes you'll find me At the place where we kissed I'm sitting by myself Finding it's the 'us' I miss Watching the stars Ball my hands in two fists Refusing to believe That you do not exist...
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MoonlightKiss
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2009-09-28 15:13:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Don't Exist
(User Rating: 1 ) by razorbladekisses on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 06:54:19 PM AEST (User
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I really like this poem. It's cute in a very sad way. I felt like I could see you and feel what you were feeling.
Bravo.
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Re: You Don't Exist
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th September 2009 @ 04:19:14 PM AEST (User
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A very passionate write, well done.
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Re: You Don't Exist
(User Rating: 1 ) by Innocent_Sinner on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 10:26:57 PM AEST (User
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I love it... I think it's amazing. very well done. it's so passionate, and I could just picture it in my head.
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