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Lost My Head
Contributed by
jessb3
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Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 08:16:04 PM in AEST
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I think I may have lost my head
I mumbled to myself
I looked around the dirty floor
I looked up on the shelf
I searched amongst the pots and pans
And even through the bin
I hunted all around outside
Until the lights were dim
My quest to find my missing head
Seemed to be quite in vain
But I would not give up the hunt
I would not stop the game
And so I wandered round and round
Just like a nervous wreck
When all at once it dawned on me
My head was on my neck!
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Re: Lost My Head
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 09:43:24 PM AEST
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HA! i really dont know what else to say... this poem could be interpreted in many different ways. for me, this was the message i perceived "the things u r searching for cant be too far away." great job
take care
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Re: Lost My Head
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by spud on
Tuesday, 29th September 2009 @ 04:31:00 AM AEST
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Hi,
Yes, like it. A bit of humour for a change with a
chirpy flow to it. Well done!
Tommy
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