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pure
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 09:34:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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memory two million moments before sitting rocker still radical in the twilight room watching bright come the way my pen maps paper how far to find a way in lines sentences simple complex words merging. implausible plight brought clear eyed through page by soiled page.
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ming
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2009-09-30 09:34:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: pure
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 10:59:19 AM AEST (User
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Great ending, really powerful I thought.
-Phil
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