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darkfall
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 03:16:17 PM in AEST
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hiding places form
evening comes
whorled & meshed
against window screen
swarming north wind
three thick blankets
half a dozen books
just as many pens
fall with its flickering
and becoming
buried under w/my
word-bound eyes
sundown
disolves
me
down
to
nothing
less
than
fifteen.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-10-02 15:16:17]
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Re: darkfall
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 03:56:31 PM AEST
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| I wish i could fall this way! |
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Re: darkfall
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by Mars on
Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 12:36:29 PM AEST
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| Nice work with the indention.I feel that the 'w/' detracts from it, but you are free to as you wish. |
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