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Ships
Contributed by
rivanz
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Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 04:06:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It roars through the sea
Showering oncoming voyagers.
It glides through the open space
alone and drifting.
It moans at advancing waves,
And shifts rapidly.
It crys as the waves hit
rocking it gently.
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2009-10-02 16:06:24]
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Re: Ships
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by Mars on
Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 12:34:19 PM AEST
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| The last line has such a great amount of contrast when compared with the line before it. You would think that the waves are punishing it, but they are described as gentle. Good use of imagery. |
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