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Life set in stone
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 04:11:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Life set in stone is my title and From then till now is Johnny's so I put his at the top of the poem, this is yet another co-write with my friend I hope you like it as well.
From then till now
From then till now
Life was set in stone
But now all I can see
Is just a broken home
|I sit and marvel at the sight
Of my own plight
Everything is going up in flames
And the only thing everyone is worried about is who to blame
Laughing, crying, Screaming, sighing
Why are we so vain
Breaking silence, cold defiance
Someone take away the pain
Its driving everyone insane
From then till now
Life has been set in stone
But now its all set to flames
I sit back and watch
As nights of a creeping clock
Crumble the stone where life is set
Going tick tock tick tock
The stone falls apart
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Re: Life set in stone
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by pooja on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 12:55:05 PM AEST
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Well- written. I don't know whether u intended it, but it does give an insight into the futility of wars...
How people keep fighting, killing innocents and all they do in penance is place the blame
Good work, plz keep sharing |
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Re: Life set in stone
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by pooper on
Saturday, 8th January 2022 @ 12:33:38 AM AEST
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Makes one think of their own life experience.
While I doubt any life is set in stone in passing, mortality is final, and death is sometimes set under a marking stone. |
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