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I Breath
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 06:47:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Dear love
Its ok to think of you sometimes,
I mean I shared my soul with you remember?
Hope you dont mind though.......
Did you get the kisses I sent on the clouds?
Your so far away and I cant afford to see you.
Do you think ok me sometimes still?
Dont answer that,I am just being silly.......
Crazy girl.
Are you happy?
Cause you pull on my heart lately.
Just let me know that your doing alright,ok?
........never going to happen I know.......
You married to her,I no longer have the right to share with you.
Never got the chance to,
dont worry I dont hate you,
just miss you like I dont want to breath no more.
But I will breath,I breath,I am breathing......
...it hurts...
Tears flow as I write these words down.
Dont get me wrong
live goes on and even if its not with you,
I am breathing.
I am doing good,
took your advise,
living each day as though its my last.
So if today was that last day I must say......
I dont hate you but wish you never stole my heart,
wish I could forget you but I cant,
I breath for you and what I know we could have been
I breath for all those memories.
I breath cause I know you never ment to hurt me.
I breath cause every tear I cry is not for nothing.
I breath cause even if you dont,
I still love me.......
Love always
Charlie
Copyright ©
LadyRose
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2009-10-04 06:47:46]
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Re: I Breath
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by jessb3 on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 07:15:38 AM AEST
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| There is a lot of emotion in your poem and I really enjoyed reading it. I have been in a similar situation and know exactly what this feels like. |
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Re: I Breath
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by longhaircg on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 09:59:04 AM AEST
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I hear you from my heart to
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Re: I Breath
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by pooja on
Sunday, 4th October 2009 @ 12:50:44 PM AEST
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Its a beautiful write..
creates a picture when u read it even if its a sad one
Once again take care and stay strong...
ps- I know its not my place to advice
still I'd say sending the letter would only hurt you more and prevent u from moving on, or atleast trying to
Give urself time to heal friend
May God bless u, take care |
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Re: I Breath
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 02:13:23 PM AEST
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| Well it's a devastating situation. Such love is forbidden, but still doesn't fade. |
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Re: I Breath
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by LaurelNicole on
Saturday, 7th November 2009 @ 01:36:50 PM AEST
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| This poem is really amazing. The description in it is extravagant. keep writing. god bless. |
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