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Real Enough
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 08:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How did I fall so fast ever so deeply....
When had the die been cast oh so neatly...
How did my fortune suddenly amass silently... discreetly....
When had my happiness become so vast hurting me sweetly....
How did I ever earn freedom from the past sanity gripped so fiercely....
When had you appeared from my dreams... I'm aghast.... erasing the nightmares fleetingly...
How or when are simply the questioning rambling semantics of a broken spirit in a reality where you unfettered a leaden soul..... secured a distrustful heart... retrieved her stolen sanity... and unchained the siren to once again to feel safe enough to finally rest in the arms of a man who loves all of her....
So achingly real
real enough to finally breathe....
real enough to seek the path out of her forest...
real enough to venture through the open meadow...
Real enough to love you back.....
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2009-10-05 20:14:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Real Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by picklepuss on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 11:58:53 PM AEST (User
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Wow! I am moved with emotion at your pairing of words and phrases. You have pulled deeply from your heart and shared your passion. Love on! Keep writing! |
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Re: Real Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 08:00:59 AM AEST (User
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Your heart sang throughout this beautiful poem. It is super. Good work here.
I also loved the style format, it carries itself.
Michelle |
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