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bare trees
Contributed by
ming
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Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 07:56:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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smell of rotted leaves,
dawn changing
from charcoal
to indeterminate grey
passing the realm of gone,
a moment elsewhere,
scattered nothingness.
I leave nothing...
that's enough.
just hanging between
afterwards and sound
falling apprehensively away.
rain falling in fat drops,
dense dripping trees,
crows flying low.
the old play stll running
rerunning, without
actuallly moving.
nearly invisible in gloom
bare trees
worn out.
Copyright ©
ming
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2009-10-06 07:56:42]
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Re: bare trees
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 08:34:14 AM AEST
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| I think I may be a "bare tree" type guy, thing.. That's the beauty of decay. |
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Re: bare trees
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 09:54:33 AM AEST
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Good stuff, nice opening.
-Phil |
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