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Who We Are
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
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Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 12:27:21 PM in AEST
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we may be
that of which
we
don't want.
for
who we are
is not birthed from
thoughts of intent.
but rather from
patterned impulses
which push and shove with little regard for our
sensibly scribed script.
they scurry inside us to come out.
and when they do ...
the strong ones
the seasoned ones
emerge
to
dictate
who we are.
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
... [
2009-10-07 12:27:21]
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Re: Who We Are
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 04:59:49 PM AEST
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...and don't we fight it all the way!
dirk, this is amazing. Becoming who we are is sometimes a difficult
task. Especially when what we want ISN'T what we are. *sigh*
Wonderfully written.
~ Breezy
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Re: Who We Are
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 12:32:30 AM AEST
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| Hmmmm... quite thought provoking. Are we all but what is predestined from our DNA? |
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Re: Who We Are
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by spud on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 07:36:37 AM AEST
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Hi,
Extremely thought-provoking write - with much
merit.
Aspired to be an 'Einstein' only to fail miserably
at the logical(????) computations of algebra.
In another life, maybe ............
Well written, my friend.
Tommy
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Re: Who We Are
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by simonwrite on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 11:35:49 AM AEST
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| i really like it, these impulses have no regard for who we think we are or want to have others think we are. |
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Re: Who We Are
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by muskiewoman on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:05:28 PM AEST
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Perfectly put into words.
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