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Prediction of a Paradox
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 02:09:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Virgin Asen quakes
its feeble roots stir and lift.
Wind will spread its seed.
Miles from where it grew,
a feeble aspen tumbles--
roots heavy with soil.
Capable Gard'ner
watched an aspen crash nearby--
claims the damaged tree.
Roots wind through new soil
struggling and unfamiliar,
satiated by rain.
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2009-10-07 14:09:43]
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Re: Prediction of a Paradox
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 04:25:20 PM AEST
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Unusual, but gravitating chels. I see eternity inside your verse; cause
and coincidence. Beautifully worded and filled with a hope that lights
the darkest corners. wonderful post. Worth waiting for. :)
~ Breezy
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Re: Prediction of a Paradox
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 04:38:59 PM AEST
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Well I always applaud innovation. I myself have sometimes snuck haikus into normal poems...(without admitting to it of course). So I think you did great!
-Phil |
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