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I am a god, I am a faceless warrior
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 12:35:01 PM in AEST
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I wanna take your words
and make then wide
magnified
So that I can give them to the world
Everything you say
every dream you ever made
I saw a faceless God
emerging from a volcano
ash and air, fire and elusiveness
He made me want to cry, teary eyed
Hands in my hair
pressed against an ice cold window
I needed to slow the burning
the heat of my internalized fire
Your voice in my head
my hands don't know where to go
when you touch me
when you try
try so hard
to love me.
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Inevitable
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2009-10-08 12:35:01]
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Re: I am a god, I am a faceless warrior
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 04:05:50 AM AEST
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Ah yes, I recognise the final stanza:
'Your voice in my head
my hands don't know where to go
when you touch me
when you try
try so hard
to love me.'
Which you posted as a comment on one of my poems. I remember thinking your ending actually upstaged my poem lol So it was good to see you post the full thing. Another vivid, emotional extravaganza!
-Phil |
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Re: I am a god, I am a faceless warrior
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 01:29:32 PM AEST
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I know, I know, I've said it before but I'm saying it again. I love your style.
Tim
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