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I Don't Know
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 08:21:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I don't know
I seem to get restless
I have felt it before
Coming in cycles
Mental indispositions
Suffering with tortuous thoughts
I move on
Dwelling leads only to death
I don't know
It is so hard to explain
Mere words cannot touch
The mind just takes over
If I wallow too long
And seem to go nowhere
The switch is thrown
And I must journey forward
I don't know
What keeps me going
Life and its wonders
The anticipation
A new moon perhaps
A sunrise a sunset
The glory of discovery?
These challenges I must pursue
I don't know
How could I explain
When there is no logic
I have no method
No solid intentions
Just inhale
Exhale and
Follow the flow...
Laura Howell Horner
Penned 9/28/09
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Re: I Don't Know
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 09:31:51 AM AEST
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You're a good writer, i loved your poem, but it's so strong that it keeps hinting me, that you are'nt doing so good
whatever is bringing you down, turn it around, life gets rough, show em your tough! =)
Go!...Spoil yourself, spend
"me time" lol...do what else makes you happy...get Happy...=) |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 08:22:08 PM AEST
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((((((((((((((((((( LAURABEAM ))))))))))))))))))))
Doesn't everything lead to death? 
I love the ponderings and contemplations in your wonderful new poem. I don't have all the answers but I have one...
And that is this:
You are cool Laurabeam. You are real.
Oh, and one udder thing.... FB isn't the only website out there, ya know. 
Anyways,
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 10:13:10 PM AEST
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Inhale exhale oh yea!
I am so happy to see you posting again!
I loved this write, you are the stuff!
Hugs N love ya tons
Shall |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 06:45:41 AM AEST
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| Nice ending! |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 01:53:07 PM AEST
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My dear friend and fellow Hippie ....
It is wonderful to view your crafty pen put to page once again. I must say powerfully deep in its perceived meaning ...
it took me on a journey in my own heart and mind and in my struggles to move forward through many pains of my own.
In the end the last stanza speaks volumes.
Peace to you my dear sister
~Shannon |
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Re: I Don't Know
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 10:06:30 AM AEST
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Doggone!
Deep thinkin' poets can sure dwell in the escape of excellence. Ya did it here. Mighty fine capture of, looks to me, frustration. Great write. I too love the endin'.
wabl
Ken |
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