|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Obstacles
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 07:49:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Life left unlived
Blockades
keeping one from moving on;
Life without love
Poison-arrows
being shot by dark demons;
Life bleached of color
Depression
creating overcast dreams;
Life robbed of meaning
Theft
depleting humanity's trust;
Life without happiness
Tears
flooding the soul of self-control;
Life lived on the surface
Emptiness
dictating a human's path.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-10-13 19:49:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Obstacles
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 07:59:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Even though this is quite sad I love the way it's written. Keep it up, Heidi!
Tim
 |
|
|
Re: Obstacles
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 03:49:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Life wouldn't be much worth living without the challenges we must face, but sometimes they can seem insurmountable.
All we can do is keep trying to overcome those pesky obstacles.
Good write. Thanks for posting it. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
