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When You....
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Wednesday, 14th October 2009 @ 04:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you speak to
me your words reach
a heart that I
assumed would stay broken
forever....
When you intently
listen to me you
embrace a woman
that has never been
endeavored....
When you look at me
your eyes pierce
my soul that of
which I thought had
been stolen from my core....
When you touch me
your hands caress
my body one of
which I thought I'd
never give again anymore...
When you love me
you release all
my defences and
create a trust I've
not ever felt before...
You've brought back
what I thought I had lost for
so long...
you make my
spirit soar
when you......
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jaeann
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2009-10-14 16:07:44]
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Re: When You....
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 12:18:17 PM AEST
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Losing a Loved One can be the most devastatingly, hopeless feeling ever. I've been there, and I know what you must do.
Stop concentrating on You!!! Get yourself outside of you...........look for someone even worse off than you..............
It's marvelous therapy, and putting your pen to paper is most healing also.
I could feel your pain, and hear your heart scream, but you must move on Jaymee girl. None of this will ever bring him back. Move on girl..............Move on girl.........Move on.
Love you
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