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unasked question
Contributed by
Durra1
on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 10:49:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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The strong wind is causing a revolution in her hair
The beauty of her brunet face is one thats rare
Her delicate feet are sinking in the muddy sand
Wearing along silky dress there she stands
Her sleepy eyes are protected with long thick lashes
Feeling her presence the excited wave on the rock clashes
lips dried and pale and they hoped to touch her cheek
They were behind her for her so wanted attention they seek
Though not slightly cared about whoever was watching
Whether its love or hatred from their hearts are launching
Searching for an answer to the question that great men fear
A hard question that no human wants to hear
Is it because our weak minds and easily broken nature
Though my lord blessed me with thinking than any other wild creature
I shall return to my small hole and I shall live my destiny
Past, present, future same fate for every beggar and king until infinity
To you who I cant be more grateful, to you I seek mercy from, to you who made us his creation
Staring at his sky, the Great answered her unasked question
In his property, the brunet face was asked by the teacher to go back to her seat
She turns look at them who for her attention seek, remembering that she has to fulfill her fate then walked with pride to her ordered destination with her same delicate feet
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Re: unasked question
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 11:45:03 AM AEST
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| Building a relationship with God |
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Re: unasked question
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 12:21:29 PM AEST
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| Very Beatuful, I love it. |
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Re: unasked question
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:24:09 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc,
for a first post I am very impressed.
This caused a stir while reading.
Beautiful vivid images, it also flowed and read well.
Michelle |
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