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I Will Never Forget
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 08:47:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The rage in your eyes,
your hands leaving defined marks,
shattered forever
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-10-15 20:47:39]
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Re: I Will Never Forget
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:09:15 PM AEST
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It's a very well penned heartbreak. So much emotion, I look back at the poem and am surprised at how short it is, with how great a message it sent.
Take care,
David |
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Re: I Will Never Forget
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:17:39 PM AEST
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Oh sweety this makes my heart ache I feel it. I understand it. Very powerful in such a short verse. You are good at this type of deep expression. I hope in time those wounds will heal.
Hugs you tight
Michelle |
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Re: I Will Never Forget
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 01:24:08 AM AEST
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| I mirror what Michelle said. This is soooo sad. :-( So sorry to hear this but, yes, you definitely know how to work the haiku. So, pain can cause poets to write great things and this one is no exception to that. Heartwrenching. |
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