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Autumn Romance
Contributed by
Everlasting_Flame
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Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 01:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take a walk with me through the autumn leaves,
The many enchanting colors fall from the season trees.
This misty morning dare not leave,
For I wish to stay here with you,
Our autumn romance forever remembered,
By the soft caress of an autumn breeze.
But like our love this moment falls,
The soft wind turns to an icy gale,
Silver frost covers this now frozen ground.
Our autumn romance has gone,
And this stabbing cold winter encases my forever longing heart.
Copyright ©
Everlasting_Flame
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2009-10-16 13:53:53]
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Re: Autumn Romance
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 04:07:52 PM AEST
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Ouch. What an ending!
-Phil |
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Re: Autumn Romance
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 04:18:55 PM AEST
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This poem is as beautiful as Autumn, colorful and well written. It touches my heart.
The ending oh I so felt that.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Autumn Romance
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 04:23:59 PM AEST
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A very touching write young one.
It is so sad that these lessons are learned at such a young age.
Life moves forward as well should the beauty of your pen.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: Autumn Romance
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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| how sad yet beautiful to............took me down memory lane........... |
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Re: Autumn Romance
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by MorguesMatter on
Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 12:05:55 PM AEST
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| Who ever you are you write beautifly, and have a gift for minipulating words, to depict whatever it is you deeply must feel-Morgues |
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