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Alice boinked the rabbit
Contributed by
ming
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Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 03:50:30 PM in AEST
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(past tense) tension woe as me reflecting or broken shard a tick a beat a tock a beat doom gloom doom small... not at all grab a life any life dump the strife doom pick up the beat toot-sweet chick a boom chick a boom boom bow wow curtsy.
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Re: Alice boinked the rabbit
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 03:52:36 AM AEST (User
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Some more great randomness from you.
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Re: Alice boinked the rabbit
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 03:47:47 PM AEST (User
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Hi,
I won't pretend that I understood everything
that you were trying to convey here...... but your
choice of words and the manner in which you
used them was clever, witty and (for me, at
least) truly unique!!
Great write!
Tommy
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