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A Final Trip
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
on
Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 04:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Psychadelic Lights flash through the window to the soul,
Ancient eyes stalking through the peephole,
Kiss the snake he will lead you to the heavenly light,
Don't be scared or the the beast may bite,
Let him guide you away from the temptations that the devil may bring,
Kiss the snake and with the angels above you will sing,
The devil responds with a fire ball of temptation,
Take these people to their final destination,
They are going to kill you, you must strike first,
This is not a trip this is your calling, they are all cursed,
The serpent strikes with a vicious blow,
The dark has taken over its time for the blood to flow.
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theurbanpoet
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2009-10-18 16:42:15]
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Re: A Final Trip
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 04:30:03 PM AEST
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eerily effective with the serpent symbolism. whether or not u r struggling with some habit, there's still time for melioration...
take care
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Re: A Final Trip
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 05:43:07 PM AEST
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Incredible verse.
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Re: A Final Trip
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 16th January 2010 @ 08:08:33 AM AEST
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Full of dark affliction!
The imagery created is thick with the battle of wills,
very well written...
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Re: A Final Trip
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by AJA on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 02:26:37 AM AEST
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Really well written
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