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''The Life''
Contributed by
tad2211
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Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 08:04:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I look at all the fancy screens
across them flash the prolific scenes
of drugs,violence,sex and things
a kid just shouldnt see
The parents arent there
theyre at the job fair
looking for a way to survive
40 years pass by
they grow old and die
kids now where they once were
this is the life
that cuts like a knife
right through through fabric of time
oh look at the trail
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tad2211
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2009-10-18 20:04:15]
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Re: ''The Life''
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 07:18:38 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
Well not often do I become a critic on anothers work so you are out of luck there lol.
I did like this poem, and it reads well.
You also captured a strong and very true message in this verse, I do so agree. Hard times now days for many.
I will watch for you.
Michelle |
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