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Together with Death
Contributed by
Jacob_Yates
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Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 06:08:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Death my love, ever watching me, patiently waiting until we are together again, dying everyday with slow ever waiting hope for resolution and a reconnection with death.
Death with it's dark soundless voice, singing her song of pain and depression, discord and hatred, her song is more of an everlasting weep, begging for our love, waiting for us to be together, crying, killing, pleading for my love, for me, us, together with death.
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Re: Together with Death
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 07:05:29 PM AEST
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OK, I liked the write but my personal opinion, I like to see it written in poem format.
It is dark, chilling and sad.
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Re: Together with Death
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by LevyMetal on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 09:54:53 PM AEST
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| Wow, i wish i could write like this! Very breathlessly indescribably amazing... |
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Re: Together with Death
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 10:05:20 PM AEST
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interesting, gloomy, and creative all-in-one.
im sure all of us will have a date with death
take care
-K.Z.
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