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untitled
Contributed by
apoetswhisper
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Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 04:20:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The signs were there, neon and bright before me
Flashing wildly and carelessly to warn me
Blinded by you're beauty, you're weapon of choice
Left me stunned, helpless, defenceless and with out voice.
MInd now clouded, surrounded with thoughts of you
Ambushed by an army of emotions I have for you
No armour strong enough to repeal
The unavoidable torture of loves pure cell.
It was you're plan to dangle me on loves lure
Have me a slave to you're heart forever and more
To cast me aside when you were done
Now a broken man stands in place for whom you called the one.
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apoetswhisper
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2009-10-20 04:20:23]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 06:01:59 AM AEST
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Love the poem, =)
especially the last line...it kinda freezes you in the moment, makes you read the whole thing again
NICE work =)
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Re: untitled
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 12:44:59 PM AEST
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I love this one, beautifully writen,
quote; ambushed by an army of emotions i have for you,
also; the unavoidable torture of loves pure cell
I have read all of your writes and this is my favorite. thankyou keep writing.
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