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I Never Thought
Contributed by
jaeann
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Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 06:57:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I never thought I'd be alone again without the one I love..... I never thought I'd grasp for straws again begging for death from above..... I never thought I'd be derailed once more left abandoned and shoved..... I never thought I'd see the olive branch lost with a cry from the dove.... I never guessed I'd be so low again desperately hanging onto everything I'd ever dreamed of..... I never guessed I'd be so lost again feeling like the lost single from a pair of gloves.... I never guessed I'd die a little each day with the realization that I would never more by you be loved.....
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Re: I Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 12:33:07 PM AEST (User
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"Time and Unforseen Occurrences befall all Mankind Jaymee dear...........What Life has handed you is so painful!!! That dirty Ole Life!!! Just know all this pain that you are feeling now, will soon ease away.........there truly is a lighter side to life..........but you must fight dear friend, fight for all you're worth....fight each day, fight each moment, and even each second...........try, try, try, and never let it get you down.
You can't control him dear friend, but you certainly can you..........are you going to let this devastate you? How dare you do that to yourself!!!! You're simply too wonderful to do that to you!
Marvel at your gifted words and poem.......
Warm love
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Re: I Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 12:46:32 PM AEST (User
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I did'nt want to comment back on my poem 'cuz then you might not check it again...
I don't think you realize, or actually, maybe you do, how great of a compliment it is for someone to say that they have been touched by your poem,
For that, thankyou,
I just read your poem too, its actually quite good, I can relate to it for a lot of things in my life.
It's always a little too late before people realize what they've lost or even how much they've lost...
I have lost a lot of things as well,In a way... I've lost a mother, a father, a brother, several friends, a home, 6 different schools, ... basically my childhood, and now I'm about to loose a faithful boyfriend...to distance and fear
Sorry anyways, thankss...love =) |
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Re: I Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 27th August 2020 @ 01:31:01 AM AEST (User
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Sad but magical as well. |
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