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Because I'll Never Tell
Contributed by
TheBeardedWander
on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 07:37:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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He's far away, it's a four hour drive
I make you feel pretty, and help your brain thrive
He's eager but meager, and quiet and prim
I sync to your being, and every last whim
Our concert is growing, and as they look on
You try and ignore the conclusion foregone
We grapple and wrestle, and don't say what is
Living in our hearts, and not within his
It wakes me and holds me, and won't let me go
Though we've never said it, the each of us know
That take it or leave it, that something is there
So I pray you realize, although we're both scared
That if we keep going, at this sluggish pace
Neither of us will know love's true embrace
Copyright ©
TheBeardedWander
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2009-10-20 19:37:31]
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Re: Because I'll Never Tell
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 11:02:40 PM AEST
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| enjoyed this poem a good dose of reality and and an impatience for a conclusion such that mayb the poem is strong until the last 2 lines |
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Re: Because I'll Never Tell
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 11:03:37 PM AEST
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| i liked the back and forth of this....there's so much wasted time ....you have a really great write here.... |
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Re: Because I'll Never Tell
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:43:57 AM AEST
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It's wonderful poem. I loved it so much. You're the great writer.
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Re: Because I'll Never Tell
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 06:18:18 PM AEST
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I liked this it has a beat to it that moves the reader right along.
The end line kind of sad though......
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