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that girl
Contributed by
pat888
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Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 03:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you have you , and i have me
what will it take for us to believe
we are exactly the same
yet completely different
i dont want this to be over
i want it well spent
you got inside my head
you got inside my heart
when i see your smile
were back to the start
helped me to feel
helped me to see
loved me to death
helped me to breathe
i want to wake up with you
i want to sleep in
whenever i am with you i feel like i win
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2009-10-21 03:12:43]
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Re: that girl
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:14:48 AM AEST
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not bad, but why the title , that girl, when you speak of you two
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Re: that girl
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:40:55 AM AEST
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It's very nice, but I think this poem might've been better... Sorry.
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Re: that girl
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:46:44 AM AEST
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| i get this.....loved me to death helped me to breath.....i like it!!! |
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