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sweet dates
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 06:50:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Sweet Dates.
Dark as gore the stagnant
river is, burning buses
clouds of dust from razed
homes, dead children and
guttural voices crying for
revenge
Friends and foes blood
soaked up by thirsty soil
where palm trees of peace
one day shall grow; sweet
dates we will eat, but not
just yet
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2002-08-01 06:50:42]
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Re: sweet dates
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 07:28:46 AM AEST
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| This is very well written... made me stop and think a sec. Love it!!! thanx |
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Re: sweet dates
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxmonstahxx on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 07:47:44 AM AEST
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| disturbing but well written |
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