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In the wet
Contributed by
holy
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Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 06:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the wet
2008-07-15 23:08:35
In the wet
You left me in a wet evening,
standing in the rain,
I almost cried.
Looking at your back,
I wanted to call your name loudly,
but I only took some rain to feel your stay.
"Don't go out in the wet,
take care!
and have a good night!"
staring at your back,
this was only what filling my mind,
taking your affection I returned.
You gave me a necklace as a token of your affection,
I advised you to watch out for slick spots on the sidewalk.
Yes,
we were much attached to each other,
it would make sense to leave early,
or I would cry.
You left me there alone,
also left a lonely memory,
Oh,
at that moment,
I remembered we had been courting for a year,
but I forgot,
it grew darker,
and became colder.
At that wet night,
I cried again,
and hovered in my dream.
Yes,
that night,
for a good sleep,
I turned on a new song,
let a lonely and wet heart dance alone......
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holy
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2009-10-21 18:59:55]
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Re: In the wet
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:05:04 PM AEST
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This is so sad...but so full of hope... Your English seems to be improving, Holy
Keep it up...
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