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My true love!
Contributed by
Tory
on
Thursday, 22nd October 2009 @ 03:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I thought that I was dreaming
and this just can't be real
I can't put into words
just how you make me feel
You touched me in a special way
I have never felt before
and every time you touch me
only makes me want you more
You took away my sorrow
you can always make me smile
and when things seem gloomy
you hold me for awhile
How you would make me feel
when things are going bad
and how you would tell me
I'm the best you ever had
So much joy and happiness
you showed me brighter days
I have grown so use to you
and all your special ways
You will always be my hero
and I'll do all that I can
I'll give you all my love
you'll always be my man!!
Copyright ©
Tory
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2009-10-22 15:43:54]
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Re: My true love!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd October 2009 @ 12:59:05 AM AEST
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You have a wonderful heart and here it shows in your writing with this one.
This flowed very easily.....quite like a breeze.
Thank you for an enjoyable read and keep up the good work.
You can only get better.
Tim
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