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A Night At The Beach.
Contributed by
Tory
on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 12:20:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Walking on the beach
one moonlit summer night
the sand between my toes
he holds on to me tight
Moon light across the water
like diamonds everywhere
it was such a beautiful sight
as we just stand and stare
A wave came crashing in
and rumbles to the shore
a storm is on its way
oh look here comes one more
A breeze begins to blow
a mist is in the air
falling on my face
he brushes back my hair
Amazed with all its beauty
there was no need to talk
he grabs me by the hand
and we begin to walk
A city girl, a country boy
he said I was a peach
I won't forget that summer night
that I spent on the beach
Copyright ©
Tory
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2009-10-26 12:20:07]
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Re: A Night At The Beach.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 11:46:59 PM AEST
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| Simple and very lovely. |
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Re: A Night At The Beach.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 02:01:46 PM AEST
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I've written about the sound of the sea from a beach myself before on more than one occasion.
It's nice how you have used it as a romantic setting in this piece
Well done
Steve |
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