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~Cemetery Whispers~
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 12:25:13 AM in AEST
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With black fires I will pursue you, though I be far away; and when cold death has separated my limbs from my spirit, my shade shall be with you wherever you are. - Virgil
I am roaming in the shadows
of the restful place.
Awaiting for you to return
sneaking in with guilt
a crime you got away with.
But, did you really?
Or shall you always be haunted
by my eye's, always returning
each Halloween night
to rest red roses upon my grave
pretending to ride waves of sorrow
yet we both know you
are a murderer.
Maybe tonight I will appear
so you will see me
knowing the coldness I now feel
caught between this world
and another world
left unfurled into nothingness.
I waited for you that night
all consumed, full of delight.
I thought it would be the night you asked
for my love, for my hand.
I loved you heart and soul
never would I have guessed
the plans you had in store for me.
Now the moon is full
and the clouds dance light in the skies.
I shall be waiting here for you tonight.
Much to your surprise
maybe you too shall die
die from fright when you really see
that my dear, you can only kill me once.
If I decide tonight is not the night I shall haunt you thrice till Halloween night and then you can face me in this realm.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-10-30 00:25:13]
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 01:18:53 AM AEST
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| revenge is sweet even from the after life wonderfully spooky and atmospheric |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by spud on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 04:11:35 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle,
Full of ghostly vengence and dark 'comeuppance!'
My God, girl ..... You ARE in the mood!!!
Enjoyed it.
Tommy
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 07:23:36 AM AEST
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Oooh! Chilling!
This reminds me of the Halloween night I spent, many years ago, alone in a 250 year-old cemetary.
But this is even spookier.
Well done. |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 07:24:17 AM AEST
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Beautifully done Michelle!
Sets the perfect tone for Halloween. |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by LadyRose on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 08:57:29 AM AEST
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| wow scary stuff..... |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by lonelywolf04 on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 02:18:43 AM AEST
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| sweet poem don't really know what to say other then really good job I love the revenge in death idea or at lest to me that's what it is leading up to. |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:13:21 PM AEST
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BrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrCelle,
Clear to the backbone, you know me, I'm not really spooky, or scary.....but this write was enough to make me that way!
I really enjoyed this one.
Say Hello to the Spooks for me *smiles*
Warm love
consue |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 01:35:30 PM AEST
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wicked good creepy girl lol, how's every lill thing?
love, hugs, woofies, ever nessa |
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Re: ~Cemetery Whispers~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 01:29:27 AM AEST
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Don't know how I missed this the first time around but here I am.
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And oooooooooooooooooo scary. Me likes. I likes this kind of stuffage.
Thanks,
Tim
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