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All-Star Dreams
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 01:09:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thoughts of a felon....
An autistic being,
Bloody footprints....
The path of an artistic fiend.
Alcohol spills from drunken souls
The truth averted beyond reach
Autumn marks a phoenix death
The shells of street warfare rest beneath.
Bottleneck's ly on the ground
Bloodshed cloaked by candy rain,
The blacksmiths of despair feed....
Feed off the warfare of shame.
Forgotten boycotts from the day before
Religious dogmas dominate the lost,
Doves fly away from fire,
Criminal dynasties flourish at a deadly cost.
Cocaine embodies filthy nightmares
The enemy of an ethical state,
The hero of an economy,
yet greed overpowers drug addicts’ fate.
An austere life....
The prison to the unmotivated,
Authority await guidance to fail
so justice may strike hearts of the un-intimidated...
A pair of All-Stars asleep on the ground,
The legacy of a sorrow unseen by eyes,
They take the shape of new life
and into the streets a phoenix shall rise.
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2009-10-30 01:09:52]
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Re: All-Star Dreams
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 01:22:14 AM AEST
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| powerful imagery the phoenix and you have descrribed the ashes from which it rises well |
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Re: All-Star Dreams
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by LadyRose on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 08:49:46 AM AEST
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| this was really well written....I felt it with every word...its so sad yet all so true |
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