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Bloody Angel
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 07:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A bloody angel with tears falling as he sings
Casting a shadow
Of blood dripping from his wings
And a flaming halo
Not knowing what hes done
As he stands in front of a burning chapel
Watching as they all run
Calling him a devil
Fire falling from the sky
As the earth shakes
He lets out a painful cry
As he awakes
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lonelywolf04
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2009-10-30 19:56:32]
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Re: Bloody Angel
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 08:46:34 PM AEST
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Nice and chilling then the end was like oh heck a dream or nightmare lol. I loved it.
Good work
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Re: Bloody Angel
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 30th October 2009 @ 08:58:10 PM AEST
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This painted a good picture in my head,
great poem, I myself like the dark poems
The last stanza makes me think of Armageddon
again great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Bloody Angel
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 1st November 2009 @ 11:05:25 AM AEST
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| this was beautiful.....you made him identifiable....vulnerable.....made me want to comfort him.... |
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