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The World
Contributed by
lk
on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 12:23:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The world is veiled by people
Who twist your words around
Take and crush
The good intentions of your heart
Unfortunately, yes,
The whole world is
Neither good or balanced with bad
It is always equal
Even when the days are filled with sorrow
Yet days are supposed to be filled
With laughter
Why is it so not true?
Why is the days filled with sadness
And death?
I curse the people
Who seem to have the luck
The people
Who seems to have no care
They are free,
Free from this destiny
The worst of the people
These traitors
Are neither your friend or your foe
Just taken over by the bad in the world
Copyright ©
lk
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2009-10-31 12:23:26]
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Re: The World
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by kye on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 06:31:20 PM AEST
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This is a quality poem. It is very well written, insightful and creative in a knowledgeable way. I see a creative thinking process in your writing style. That is commendable.
Words are amazing when they form and come together they can impact and say so very much.
Well done.
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