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swallowed
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 04:58:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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chewed up
juicy fruit
eclipsed
moon
you fly
invisible
through
lips of spoiled
sin my skin
orders disorder
sleepless
morning glory
glamour face
while I slip
into or that
occasion
alone
snatched
all I have
dearly taken
entered
freely
believe me.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-10-31 16:58:55]
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Re: swallowed
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 07:13:42 PM AEST
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