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scrutinize
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 09:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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entanglement
notice the detail
obscure poem ALERT!
spin the moon sun
and stars
chaotic times
dream of Winter
opposite me
opposite you
a crumbling void
rubble & cold bones
cloudburst painted
blood red lower
the boom mania
in the tribes
clarity as a whim
a promise of kind
look closely now
tugging the strings
to the END
walking in shadows
language strange
in all my valleys
nooks and crannies
in pursuit of lost sanity.
Copyright ©
ming
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2009-10-31 21:43:03]
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Re: scrutinize
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 08:14:15 AM AEST
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Hi,
Yip! You've got me again!
But I still like your blend of words!
Tommy
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