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What are teh Words?
Contributed by
Kirby
on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 03:58:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I sit here pen in hand.
I know I must tell you something.
Yet I dont know how.
So many words come to mind.
But I know that not a one will console you.
Not even no words at all.
Ive done a very bad thing.
One I cant take back.
But I can stop it from happening again.
So now I sit here.
Heart in my hands.
Finally with an explanation.
For all the things that I have done to you.
Remember that day that I said good bye to you?
Well I forgot to tell you that I loved you.
And that I always will.
But now I have a question.
One that I know that youll agree to.
Will you promise me the day and night?
Will you swear on the full moons light?
Will you be there for me when I am crying in the dark?
Will you show me things that I have only seen in dreams?
And if you do.
Then so do I.
Will you be mine for all eternity?
Because I cant lose you.
If I lose you, I lose all light and dark, all my feelings, and all my life.
So if you want to.
And if you mean it, say yes.
To be mine, in all Dimensions of Love.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2003-04-02 15:58:48]
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Re: What are teh Words?
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by Sexygirl on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 06:37:08 PM AEST
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| This is so well written....I hope that you can get back together again.....So much thought has gone into this work....I wish you all the best.... |
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Re: What are teh Words?
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by Sara on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 08:50:34 PM AEST
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I think this was very well written, and it expressing feelings well.... Keep up the great writing!!!
Sara |
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Re: What are teh Words?
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by Kirby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:53:14 PM AEST
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| Thank you for your wonderful comment! I have sooo many more poems up my sleeve! This won't be the last of me you'll read! but thanks again! |
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Re: What are teh Words?
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by Kirby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 03:56:09 PM AEST
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| Hey sexygirl! Thanks for the opnion! The sad thing is that we both ahven't talked to eachother in about a year! I tried calling a few weeks ago and last week but he never called back! Hey, if it's meant to be then it will happen1 Thank you for the comment! It does mean alot to me when someone writes to me! Thanks again! |
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Re: What are teh Words?
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:43:02 PM AEST
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Will you swear on the full moons light?
If I lose you, I lose all light and dark, all my feelings, and all my life.
To be mine, in all Dimensions of Love.
these are beautiful thoughts and lines and there are more, a truly beautiful poem, outstanding, i hope you sent it to the person in question
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Re: What are teh Words?
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by TheeCductress on
Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 10:04:41 PM AEST
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| WOW! I really like this one. I can feel the pain of loss in your words. Very well written. Good luck!!! Alicia |
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