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Just Waiting
Contributed by
closp0215
on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 01:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit like a fool.
First tear crawling down my cheek.
Thinking what I have done?
I saw you just the other day
with your hair let down,
your skirt swaying side to side,
eyes as beautiful as a waterfall.
Now your in the hands of another guy.
I gave you my heart,
my life now its all smashed, broken and bleeding.
Did I do something wrong?
I was with you all along
always feeling like im in heaven.
Now I fell into the burning ditch in hell.
Is there something wrong I did?
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2009-11-02 13:54:30]
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Re: Just Waiting
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 09:12:21 PM AEST
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You wrote this very well.
eyes as beautiful as a waterfall, nice.
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