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Shaking House
Contributed by
anonymous1212
on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 06:24:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This houses walls They storm and shake The inner being Alone it quakes
The screams so loud Are silent alone The world is bright Outside this home
This little heart It nears on breaking And weakens from The house thats shaking
And the voice that comes From this little heart Holds thoughts To tear this house apart
This shaking house Is not home And the souls inside They drift alone
And the souls may drift on Their own way Until it comes Their dying day
The shaking house Yearns to see better But cannot escape This stormy weather
So on and on The thunder rolls And this shattered house It takes its toll
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2009-11-03 06:24:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shaking House
(User Rating: 1 ) by jenniferstein2006 on
Tuesday, 3rd November 2009 @ 06:48:02 AM AEST (User
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i cannot explain how i feel about this...its just so great! you've totally captured how i feel right now and how many others feel as well...love it |
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Re: Shaking House
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST (User
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This is something that goes right to the readers heart and rests there.
Incredible verse but haunting and sad to me, relatable.
Michelle |
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