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season's change
Contributed by
simonwrite
on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 04:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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big man has his bags packed up
hes shined his light and moves on
a soft distant cold beauty
sends snowflake kisses
to dance quietly on sugar plum lips
its all the same just changed
liquid to solid
more layers
pick up water feel the crystals turn ur hands cherry red
diamonds melting in the your palm
its all the same just changed
hot to cold
sweat to shivers
the sharper wind paints rosy cheeks and sky blue lips
sleeping with the comfort of the womb
shielded from the harsh piercing cold cold
as the heat outside fades
the warmth inside grows
dry cracked lust
now soft moist passion
a fireplace cracking and spitting with hearty mirth
no need for big intimidating words
you wont find any bone cracking morrow melting wordplay
this is about comfort
let the words seep like warm cider into the your belly
let these sparks crawl through your eyes
feed your brain with love dim light and creativity
tonight get your favorite blanket, your favorite girl, and sit on your favorite couch
coexist become one
tis the season
tidings of joy and comfort ☺
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simonwrite
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2009-11-04 16:57:17]
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Re: season's change
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by elle on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 05:18:23 PM AEST
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| I like the feelings this evokes & the smile that won't subside. . . elle :) |
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Re: season's change
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 06:15:36 PM AEST
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Yes I mirror Elle, I could hear the pops in the fireplace, there is just something about a fire ahhhhhhhhhhh............Lovely images and feeling, good work!
Michelle |
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Re: season's change
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 05:43:29 AM AEST
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I liked your writing and its just what Im going to do build a fire.
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