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Damaged
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 09:02:28 PM in AEST
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Was it a dream of moons past, or a fantasy of days to come?
Your face Ive seen before, memories of someone I loved
Emotions overfill a heart thats been killed
Tears are like wine, my cup over-flows
Scars of battles lost, victory seldom sung
Going through life, pieces are picked up
Broken inside as my smile is painted on
Finding it hard to breathe, wanting to give up
So love has damaged me again, when does the healing begin
Cold and numb, unsure of the future to come
Looking in the mirror at a statue of stone
Dead on the inside, only flesh and bone
Eyes half shut, pride coughed up
Choke on the ashes, rest within a casket
Love is dead, soul cut and bled
Alone Ive become, the heart of The Phantom
So time moves on while misery sings her song
The company is nice, but the hurt goes on
Deep is the wound, I hope it ends soon
Can you tell.my hearts been through hell?
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: Damaged
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th November 2009 @ 09:42:34 PM AEST
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Wow, sad but well written.
Considering all things, I'm sure you'ven been thru hell.
I'm so happy to hear you are still with us. I've been concerned about you. I think about you every day and wondered how you've been. You'll are still in my daily prayers.
Pm me any time. I'm here for you. I can listen if nothing else.
huggs, luv, prayer, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Damaged
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 11:19:24 AM AEST
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Yes, I can tell...but I know you are a strong and brave man and soon your heart will heal.. and you'll come out a winner...
I really enjoyed reading this extremely beautiful poem...
Thank you for your flattering comment on my poem to Celina... It made me smile...
Hugs and Happiness...
Jenni |
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Re: Damaged
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 12:20:38 PM AEST
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Oh this is sad to read, yes I can also tell.
You have written your heart and soul well in this poem. I will mirror both Em and Jen, with all they said.
Yes do pm or email me, sometimes it just helps to have someone listen.
Be safe, take care, thank you! Really thankyou for what you are doing. Know that you are fondly thought of each and every day my friend.
Hugs
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Re: Damaged
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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Your heart and eyes bleed salty tears,
but you struggle on, despite your fears.
A sad but beautifully written piece of poetry.
Thankyou x Peace, Thoughts, & Prayers...
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