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Where You Are
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 09:30:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She feels his touch en every raindrop on her skin
The sun kisses her; she feels him from within
A soft breeze embraces her like his arms
She is with him until it's ruined by her alarm.
Get up lazily and try to face another day
Without him around she doesn't have much to say
She hears his voice in every rustle of the trees
An image of them she desperately tries to seize.
She feels the connection when she looks into the stars
She whispers softly, "Baby, is that where you are?"
Without an answer she is left to go to bed
But without sleep; too many thoughts run through her head.
She feels his touch in ever flower petal on her skin
The moon kisses her softly; she loves him from within
A soft whisper holds her as she falls asleep
And in her heart, it is him she will always keep.
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MoonlightKiss
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2009-11-05 09:30:12]
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Re: Where You Are
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by fatcakes on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 04:36:37 PM AEST
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this was pretty beast,
it makes me think of someone, who has lost a lover, how horrible it would be, just to make peace with the world again |
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Re: Where You Are
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th November 2009 @ 02:03:41 AM AEST
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A good rhyming structure and some powerful imagery. Good work!
Best wishes,
Phil |
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