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falling in
Contributed by
fatcakes
on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 04:26:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've never felt this before,
My heart, races out of my chest,
We, meet at last,
My heart, pounds, ready to explode,
How can this be?
How can perfection choose me?
Surrounded by rose petals,
Your lips pressed against mine,
This feeling is overpowering
I can't even react.
Together we lay, falling,
Falling, deeper in,
Overhead the clouds pass by,
It seems so hard to comprehend,
How can perfection choose me?
Our lips lock, just one more time,
Lightning strikes, Sparks fly,
It's all so obvious now,
Can't you see?
We're clearly meant to be,
Together forever,
just you and me.
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fatcakes
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2009-11-05 16:26:49]
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Re: falling in
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by fatcakes on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 04:46:50 PM AEST
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