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Your Beautiful World
Contributed by
karoody
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Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 04:55:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The right words to say
The right things to do
I wish my heart could find
Tell me friend
What it would take
To put that smile
Back in your heart
What it would take
For you to find
That peacefulness inside
I would paint your world beautiful
Sunsets coloring the sky
All through the day
Take you riding on a horse
Through the rock gardens
Into an endless meadow
Or is it the night sky you prefer
Stars everywhere
Perhaps a harvest moon
Reflected across the ocean
The song of the tide
Singing you sweet lullabies
These things I would do
If only I could
Just so you can see
The beauty you bring
To the world around you
To the hearts of those you love
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karoody
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2009-11-09 16:55:43]
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 06:43:28 PM AEST
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Kara,
this is beautiful and a beautiful poem for Tim!
I second you start to finish!
Michelle |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th November 2009 @ 07:35:52 PM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((((( KARABEARA ))))))))))))))))))))
Right now, I'm speechless. Um, so all I gots is I loves ya too, Karabeara!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, and ALL of the above. |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by spud on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 05:24:55 AM AEST
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Hi,
This beautiful poem will tell him everything he needs to know .......
That, you're there for him!
Tommy
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Anu on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 06:48:43 AM AEST
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Pleasant to Read and as they say......love the one who loves you ..! :)
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 03:43:56 PM AEST
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 You are part of that beautiful world. |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 04:13:03 PM AEST
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Tim, if Kara were to paint you a world like she says I would envy you.
As for me I don't know if I'm ever at peace inside maybe I ust neded to re paint my own world
anyways great write again kara
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 05:38:17 PM AEST
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Awww! This is so lovely!
I really enjoyed reading it. Lucky Tim!!!
Luv Star x x x |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 12:09:47 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet. I bet Timmy doesn't know how to repay you. well his love for you will do. |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:39:32 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, written for one dear, in your unique and lovely from the heart style,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 08:32:31 PM AEST
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I visit here often. |
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Re: Your Beautiful World
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 01:17:12 PM AEST
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Just a beautiful poem your wording was exclent in choice and I find within your words the picture you painted. Beautiful write.
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